Elevator Pitch No. 2 (17A)
For my second elevator pitch, I kept a lot of the script in the beginning the same because I think it gives good context to the opportunity I want to exploit but I did change a bit of the ending. In the comments from my last pitch, I received a suggestion to "consider the marketing and pricing as these will no doubt play a key role in the development of your business." So within the last chunk I added a few things related to marketing.
https://youtu.be/6mOd7ozHEvs
Once again, I'd be thankful for any and all constructive feedback so I can improve!
Hey, your second pitch is great! This second pitch was a great way for us to stand back and reflect on our abilities to present to a crowd, or a screen. I think your last pitch in a few weeks will be strong and motivating!
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Chloe
Hello Juliana,
ReplyDeleteI think your second pitch was very well executed. You delivered your proposal with confidence and seemed to have had a solid idea of what you want to create. I really like your pitch and hope you seek success with hard work being put into this idea.
Hello Juliana, great post this week! Much like with my own post you seemed to take whatever criticism you got and used it in a very constructive way in order to better your pitch. I think that the changes you made to your pitch were for the better, and what it caused is a more coherent video and pitch that shows how familiar you are with your subject and the passion you have for it as well. Great job!
ReplyDeleteJuliana, I really enjoyed your pitch. It was thought out very well, and you were very prepared. I was able to gain a clear understanding of your most recent revision of your idea. Also, your incorporation of constructive criticism into your pitch will definitely help you succeed. I think you handled it very well, and I am excited for what is next. Great job.
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