Elevator Pitch — Third Times the Charm (22A)
For my third and last elevator pitch, I still decided to keep most of the script the same. However, I did have to shorten some parts of it because my last pitch was almost two minutes! So I simply made this one more concise. Most of the comments from my second attempt said I did a good job presenting and that I had confidence in what I was saying. It is definitely easy for me to be confident and sure of what I am proposing because I love coffee so much and am passionate about making this dream a reality!
https://youtu.be/D4yEHp5eMn8
For the final time, I'd be thankful for any and all constructive feedback! :)
Hey, i enjoyed your final pitch! Your idea is beautifully fleshed out, and can be a total success if you chose to continue it in the future. I hope to see more before our class comes to a close!
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chloe
Hi Juliana! Great job on your pitch this week, I think that you showed full mastery and familiarity with your topic. I also think that its great that you decided to change up the location and your prompt a bit. It shows that you take the feedback you get and truly try to implement it into your idea. Great job this week!
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ReplyDeleteYour pitch seems successful and it seems as though you have thoroughly figured out what you would like to do. Though it is structured well, I think you ought to condense what you are sharing with the viewer to be able to memorize your potential business idea. By elevator pitch 3, we should have a solid ideal business pitch set and I feel as though you did that well.